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An Old Gunner's Poems
Mike Subritzky
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Vietnam: Täupiri - The Open Window - Sister
Antarctica: Scott's Hut     Bosnia: The Letter
Africa: At Assembly Place "Lima" - Anzac Exchange - A Cigarette Comrade - Soldiers Farewell

Taupiri

Haul hard on the ropes Gunners
stay close to the track
haul hard on the ropes Gunners
there's no turning back.

Sing your waiata Gunners
haul hard and sing
Taupiri's steep, Gunners
and the old women cling.

No more the fire missions Gunners
his time has come
halt at the top Gunners
turn his face to the sun.

Bury him deep Gunners
then shed a last tear
this chief now sleeps Gunners
as the evening draws near.

One last goodbye Gunners
his final rest
The Regiment's loss Gunners
he was one of our best.

RIP Bombardier R.M. Whitiora RNZA


The Open Window

Through the open window
across the meadow green
and down beside the river bank
I drift at night in dream.

Where willows sweep the water
and birdsong fills the air
the morning sunlight greets me
with wild flowers everywhere.

A fat jack trout for breakfast
and a brew of billy tea
the smell of burning wood smoke
that's where I long to be.

So give me some more dreamtime
and I'll drift back there once more
to a time of endless sunshine
before the Vietnam war.



Sister

Young man, you ask me who I am,
and why I wear this faded yellow ribbon...

I am the woman, who held your dying uncle's hand,
and wrote a letter once that broke your grandma's heart.

I am she, who met the 'Dust-Off' at the door,
and carried bloodied, broken bodies through to triage.

Then cut through muddied boots and bloody combat gear,
and washed away the blood and fear and jungle.

I kept the faith when even hope was lost,
and cried within, as young lives ebbed away.

Those hours when death, frosted dying eyes,
mine, was the last smile many young men saw.

I have the voice, that blinded eyes remember,
and the touch of reassurance through the pain.

In darkest night when combat would return,
it was my name that many soldiers called.

I have dressed their wounds, and wiped away their tears,
and often read them letters sent from mum.

I hugged them close, and willed each one my strength,
and smiled and prayed that each boy made it home.

And here today, you ask me who I am...
I am the Nurse, who served in Vietnam.

Tribute to Pam M-T and all the Kiwi Nurses

Scott's Hut


There's a cross on a cliff near the headland
where a sailor once fell to his death
and an old wooden hut close behind it
that's got seal blubber stored underneath.

It's a lonely old walk from McMurdo
and the vastness just catches your eye
but you trudge through the snow to get down there
to honour those brave men who died.

There are memories waiting to greet you
and ghostly shapes lurk by the door
clean your bunny-boots if you should enter
'cause the ghosts don't want mud on the floor.

Inside there's a real sense of history
and the presence of spirits long gone
there's a table where men mapped adventure
swapped yarns, shared meals and heard song.

On the back of the door hangs a mutton
I've seen it, I know that it's there
and the rest of the hut is a time warp
with boxes and tins everywhere.

In the bay the whales are sounding
while the skua gulls wheel overhead
and the seals on the pack ice are sleeping
as penguin chicks wait to be fed.

There's an old weathered hut on a headland
that's waiting for Scott I am told
but he's frozen in time in the highlands
he never got back from the Pole.

Antarctica - Puckered Pete Project
VXE6 Squadron


The Letter

Dear Mr Subritzky, sorry to be a bore,
but we're sending your son Danny to the Bosnian War.
Yes, we know you did Rhodesia, your cousin Bill did Vietnam,
but we're running out of soldiers and we need a few good men.

Sure, your uncle Jack the Anzac, was in the Battle of Chunuk Bair,
and Bob Subritzky caught a packet on the Somme.
But we need a few good men, to send to Europe once again,
and we'll kit them out and send them with a song.

Cousin Fredo got a head wound in the Monte Cassino fight,
and poor old Archi, he went crazy on the wire one stormy night.
Yes, your family's done its' bit, but it doesn't count for shit,
and when your son gets back, we'll give the lad a gong.

Now you know the bloody score, it's just another friggin' war,
and we're off in a couple of days, to the blood and smoke and haze.
Of course your boy should be alright, unless the Serbs decide to fight,
because the Moslems in his sector seem OK.

1998

I wrote this poem during a train journey to farewell my son when he was posted on Operations to Bosnia in 1998, and served with B Battery, Royal Horse Artillery.

Arrangement for singing by John Archer

Dear Mr Subritzky, I hate to be a bore,
but we're sending your son Danny to the Bosnian War.
Yes, we know you did Rhodesia, and your cousin Bill Vietnam
But we're running out of soldiers and we need a few good men.

Your uncle Jack the Anzac, he fought at Chunuk Bair,
Bob Subritzky caught a packet on the Somme.
But we need a few good men, to send to Europe once again,
So we'll kit him out and send him with a song.

Dear Mr Subritzky, it's only one more war
This time we're sending Danny, I'm sure you know the score
Of course he'll be alright, unless the Serbs decide to fight,
The Moslems in his sector seem OK.

At Cassino cousin Fredo was wounded in the head
Poor old Archi went crazy on the wire.
But we need a few good men, to send to Europe once again,
And a six month tour of duty isn't long

Dear Mr Subritzky, there's been many times before
When the menfolk in your family have been sent away to war
And of course he'll be alright, unless the Serbs decide to fight
The Moslems in his sector seem OK

Your uncle Jack the Anzac, he fought at Chunuk Bair,
Bob Subritzky caught a packet on the Somme.
But we need a few good men, to send to Europe once again,
When he gets back, we'll give your boy a gong.
When he gets back, we'll give your boy a gong.


At Assembly Place "Lima"

There's death all around me, there's death in the air,
I can smell it and feel it - and I know now the fear.
The road could be mined, or an ambush await,
it may be the end - our appointment with fate.


The escorts have left us, we're now on our own,
I'm as frightened as hell - and we're all so alone.
Our armour is moving, we're leaving the town,
Rhodesians are waving, - "Keep your heads down!"


I look at the Gunner, his face is all drawn,
his machine gun is loaded - and the safety catch on.
We drive through the war zone, on dirt roads blood red,
past African kraals - with children unfed.


Expecting a tank mine, or bullet to tell,
or a Russian made rocket - to take us to hell.
At Assembly Place "Lima", the site of an old kraal,
we finally halt - and put our backs to the wall.


Raise the stars of our nation, raise the Brit's Union Jack,
put the dread right behind us - for there's no turning back.
Not there for the fighting, not there for the fall,
we are the friend of no one - and the enemy of all.
...We are the Peacekeepers.

NZATMC - AP Lima Angola 1979


ANZAC Exchange

Sarge I think I'm buggered,
I'm bitten on me back,
a bloody snakes bin crawlin' thru the grass.
So call the Medic quick,
to give me arm a prick,
and take away the pain until I pass.


Yer mate the Bombardier,
can have me 'ish' of beer,
I won't be drinkin' Fosters when I go.
I've wrote me mum a note,
and I've put it in me pack,
she's livin' down near Kunga-munga-mo.


So tell me Aussie mates,
you'ze Kiwi bloody skates,
have caused the death of one of Anzac's finest.
And when I pass away,
don't put me in the clay,
the bloody dingo's here are rife as goats.


What's that you bloody say?
The choppers on its' way?
it won't be here in time to save this Digger.

The Doc he said it's what?
Now how did that get there?
A tear tab from a beer can caused this wound?


Well, the pain will pass away,
and I'll fight another day,
but PLEEZE you'ze Kiwi's keep this to yourselves!

161 Battery at Enoggora


A Cigarette Comrade
A cigarette comrade -
before I die
my face is torn
and my eyes are gone
but if you hold it to my lips
I can still draw the flame.

It matters not comrade -
that we are foe
I'm comfortable here
in your hospital tent
quietly bleeding into the dirt below.

Forgive me comrade -
if I call my mothers name
but it's so lonely here
on your hospital floor
and it helps me with the pain.

You weep for me comrade -
please don't be sad
the cowbells sound
I hear the doves
it is a good day for my life to end.

The butt is sodden comrade -
and I leave you now
goodbye my friend
until we meet again
far, far away from this African hell.

NZATMC AP Lima 1980


Soldiers Farewell

I've saddled up, and dropped me hooch,
I'm going to take the gap,
my Tour of Duty's over mates,
and I won't be coming back.

I'm done with diggin' shell scrapes
and laying out barbed wire,
I'm sick of setting Claymore Mines,
and coming under fire.

So, no more Fire Support Base,
and no more foot patrols,
and no more eating ration packs,
and sleepin' in muddy holes.

I've fired my last machine gun,
and ambushed my last track,
I'm sick of all the Army brass,
and I sure ain't coming back.

I'll hand my bayonet to the clerk,
he ain't seen one before,
and clean my rifle one more time,
and return it to the store.

So, no more spit and polish,
and make sure I get paid,
and sign me from the Regiment,
today's my last parade.

AP Lima 1980


Mike Subritzky


Full name: Michael Raphael Gabriel Subritzky-Kusza
Location: New Zealand

Background: Born in Katikati, New Zealand, from an old Polish noble family (enobled Poland 1495). Education Saint Joseph's Convent Waihi, Waihi College. Retired professional soldier. Captain. Served in the Royal New Zealand Navy, Royal New Zealand Artillery, Royal New Zealand Air Force, US Navy-Task Force 43 Antarctica, Polish (Independent) Reserve Brigade. 13 Tours of Duty. New Zealand writer, author, war poet.

Publications: Numerous published papers, documents, articles and poems in a wide variety of media.

NZ: a dozen books on a variety of subjects and, The Subritzky Legend (Heritage Press,1990) - Official New Zealand Sesqui Centenial Project, The Vietnam Scrapbook; The Second ANZAC Adventure(Three Feathers, 1995), History of the Polish Government (in exile) 1939-1990 (Three Feathers, 1996). Nominated for New Zealand Book of the Year Awards 1996;

USA: named Book of the Quarter by Texas State University April - June 1998; honoured by the NZ ex-Vietnam Services Association by having a copy of his book The Vietnam Scrapbook; The Second ANZAC Adventure laid at the Vietnam War Memorial "Wall" in Washington D.C. during the 1997 pilgrimage; awarded the American Vietnam Veterans (honourary) Distinguished Service Medal 1997, citation "for his contribution to all veterans of the Asian conflict and immortalising the Vietnam Veterans of New Zealand for all time".

Most recent project, assisted with the official New Zealand Millennium Television Series Our People - Our Century TVNZ, 2000.

Address: Tannenberg Hall, 93 McNair Road, Te Awamutu 2400, NEW ZEALAND.
[email protected]

Also by Mike Subritzky:
- Convent kid - Saint Joseph's Parish, Waihi, 1950s
- "Merry Christmas and keep your head down" - peace-keeping in Rhodesia.
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Placed on internet 15 August 2001